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tomdotcomto

多多指教

[ 本帖最後由 tomdotcomto 於 13-7-2009 10:47 PM 編輯 ]

上下盤

普普通通，多試多拍會有大進步的。:(

tomdotcomto

好!!! 多謝c hing`~~

咁TD 會唔會搞下d影相行山團??:43: :43:

Vaio

1st one:  if the no 9 mail box located right at the center of the pic ,  it could be better.

2nd one,  bigger aperture could be better,  to soft out the background to make the bike stand out more,  now,  not quite sure what you want to express!

3rd one: I think it is the best of those four.  but zoom in more and also the water level more horizontal will look better!  It seems about 5 degree higher on the left side

4th one: Flower bigger will look better!

just my 2nd cents! :52: :52: :52:

上下盤

[quote]原帖由 tomdotcomto 於 13-7-2009 11:27 AM 發表
好!!! 多謝c hing`~~

三十幾度高溫我老人家行o吾到啦，費時要飛行服務隊抬落山。:34: :34:

tomdotcomto

多謝 vaio ching....

再試多幾張自己覺得'得得'既







[ 本帖最後由 tomdotcomto 於 13-7-2009 10:46 PM 編輯 ]

williamhychan

原帖由 上下盤 於 13-7-2009 02:16 PM 發表
[quote]原帖由 tomdotcomto 於 13-7-2009 11:27 AM 發表
好!!! 多謝c hing`~~

三十幾度高溫我老人家行o吾到啦，費時要飛行服務隊抬落山。:34: :34:

唔好話你!!我D龜速行山人仕,呢排都『休行期』

暈低左!!要十幾個人抬我落山,都唔好意思啦:p

Vaio

1st one,  not sure the subject is the light pole or the entrance.  confusing and probably walk a few step to the right,  so the entrance and the light pole doesn't overlap may be better

2nd,  a CPL may do the trick here, but the sun kind of affected the whole pic!

3rd!  the light pole look odd there.  may be remove it look better.  if it stay,  stand straight could be better.  now it is 1 or 2 degree toward the right

another 2 cents post.   Hope williamhychan or 上下盤 big bro won't laugh at me so hard! :34: :34: :34: :34: :34:

Here is my snap shot on a flower, all handheld without tripod!  either in my backyard or front yard






Equipment used,  40D with BG-E2N,  100Macro F2.8

tomdotcomto

wow~~~ nice shot ar~~

I always found some flower in fornt of a huge greenfield, if so. the 'depth' can't paly any effect. then what can I do?

Vaio

It really depends, If you use a tele lens, the focal length can make the foreground and background not as clear,  so the main subject will stand out more
try to find a sample for you , but can't find it yet.

here are some more of my shoot. Don't laugh so hard on me!:34::34::34::34:

my Twins boys


A test shot with the new Tokina AT-X 116



Golden Gate Bridge  (the tower toward the left a little)





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原帖由 tomdotcomto 於 13-7-2009 07:48 PM 發表 wow~~~ nice shot ar~~I always found some flower in fornt of a huge greenfield, if so. the 'depth' can't paly any effect. then what can I do?

tomdotcomto

原帖由 Vaio 於 14-7-2009 12:21 PM 發表
It really depends, If you use a tele lens, the focal length can make the foreground and background not as clear,  so the main subject will stand out more
try to find a sample for you , but can't find ...

wow that's very great. you are honoured to be praised

and let me try the technique later

HoTin

第一..構圖好單調..幾乎張張焦點都係晒中間..

第二..要注意下平行..好似大橋果張咁..傾斜左就唔好睇..

第三..要進步就多方面嘗試..放膽去試..因為你用緊數碼相機

alanfantasy

有個要點我想講.
留意下物件放在畫面裡時, 他的角色是甚麼.

tomdotcomto

我聽人講唔好俾張相'湯'開一半....係唔係真係最好唔好??
同埋我自己成日好自然將object 放左係左下/ 右下,,,,, 但係唔知可以點樣放係左上/ 右上....

唔好意思~~問咁多問題

Vaio

I know the 2nd one is refer to my pics, not big bro tomdotcomto's.  I pay attention on the tower,  but still end up not straight and the ground also not horizontal enough!
the 1st opinion may be also refer to me too.  for those flower shot,  since that flower is the only one,  if it shifts left or right,  I think it would look odd

for those two test shot on the street light and the electric tower,  that is the only item around outside of my home  I should fram it between  two towers may look better

but Thanks for your input!


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原帖由 HoTin 於 27-7-2009 02:32 PM 發表 第一..構圖好單調..幾乎張張焦點都係晒中間..第二..要注意下平行..好似大橋果張咁..傾斜左就唔好睇..第三..要進步就多方面嘗試..放膽去試..因為你用緊數碼相機

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